Feedback from our pitch

After we did our pitch we got feedback from the rest of the group. After looking through all the feedback the main point made from the majority of the group was that our idea wasn't original enough. We tried to think of how we could change this so that our video was not like all the others. At first we struggled to think of ideas that would make our idea more original, we are considering using green screens or looking at using a story to go along with the song to make it more original and personal.

Also the fact there are a couple of swear words in the song is an issue so using adobe we will dip the song when the swear words occur in order to suit all audiences.

more of the feedback is shown below: